27 Stanislavski in translation: character and rol’ Colley Roberts While Stanislavski continues to be an influential practitioner in the acting world, English speaking readers may be unaware of inaccuracies present in some translations of his writing. In this essay, I draw from my native Russian-speaking background to evaluate disrepencies between the original Russian and Hapgood’s English editions of Part One of the The Work Of The Actor On Himself (referred to as WAH). Any italics are translations by the author. These extracts are taken from an essay responding to the question: “What does it mean to ‘become the character’? How do one or two different practices define and actualise on stage ‘character’ in relation to the body?” An Actor Prepares – translated by Elizabeth Reynolds Hapgood and serving as the first successful publication of any part of WAH in 1936 – is not only controversially ruthlessly edited-down and “reduced” (Benedetti 2016: xxiv), but is also considered by certain critics and Russian speakers to be linguistically inaccurate to the practice-ideology Stanislavski conveys (Benedetti 1990: Carnicke, 2009). For example, according to Benedetti (1990), Hapgood’s translation suffers from an ignorance “of the System in action”, and “fails to maintain...essential distinctions” (p.276) in how Stanislavski’s action-concepts were articulated in his original writings. Not only do I assent to Jean Benedetti’s concern with clarifying how Stanislavski distinguishes action through specific Russian verbs, but I also believe there are “essential distinctions” in concepts of personhood and connection conveyed through the Russian that Hapgood seems to believe are synonymous with loose American understandings, that she thus fails to adequately convey or accommodate for the American actor. Hapgood’s distinct lack of attention given to cross-cultural nuances is only worsened by the total absence of any translation commentary in the publication, which could make the subjective process of translation more transparent. She instead opts for a foreword about Stanislavski’s work and process of writing, which could have been nonetheless vitally beneficial for contextualising the work, if she had used it to mention that this first text was only one half – Part One – of the intended WAH publication – one half of Stanislavski’s System. She does not. Even with the translation and publication of Part Two over a decade later (that Hapgood titles Building A Character), Hapgood positions the physical “incarnation” elements of Stanislavski’s System contained in this publication as if they were only add-ons to the first, and does not provide a sense of the integrated System Stanislavski envisioned (Benedetti, 1990). As it is, An Actor Prepares would pretend to be the authoritative English guide to Stanislavski’s
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